by Stephanie Naylor May 11, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
She stepped off the bus out into the city streets |
by Debbie
There is indeed a minor issue with an uneven flow and forced rhymes on certain areas of the poem. Augmenting these technical errors by tightening-up the lines will--in my humblest opinion--lift up the poem's merit. Then again, the seeming realism of the theme employed is quite appealing to tell you the truth. Sublime work. |
This poem is good the structure could have been better though. |