Wow it almost reminds me of a chose you own adventure of the beauty and the beast when you chose the wrong path. and I loved how you kept it nice and short.. make sure the I's are capitals and its perfect. nice job.

How poignant. How this piece could be interpreted in any ways possible, other than its subject allusion of Beauty and The Beast, is rather innovative. Perhaps this piece was referring to the time when the Beast haven't met Belle yet. It could also refer to the subject's inner self--morbid inner self... I liked the slightly plaintive ambiance throughout, it suits for the poem indeed. I only have complaints about the lack of punctuation and the need for the capitalization of I's. ~Marian

This was such an amazing poem. I truely did enjoy this piece it was quite beautiful in its y very own dark way. The meaning portrayed behind it was most interesting. The only things that need work throughout this is the proper puncutation. None the less a great read.~mel

I've always loved your writing. you have a great passion for it. yet another great poem. 5/5