by Boy
It is truth.. very nicely written i noticed you wrote so many natures poems. good. |
by Marc Ortiz
Well done on this one! great structure! excellent work! keep writing! :) 5/5! |
I really liked it, you never got of topic and it had a nice flow with almost a melodic rythme to it |
by Vanessa
Over time it's colors may despair but, |
by Kaila
Very nice! |
by Zeus
Its nice to write about the beauty of nature. I liked it was enjoyable. 5/5 |
by ASPHYXIATED
Rainbows are such beautiful things. |
Change "there here" to "they're here" |
by Anaisthitos
It was greatly written, very descriptive. I could picture the rainbow as I read it. The word choice was great and overall the poem was wonderful. Towards the end, though, it wasn't as good, it didn't seem nearly as significant as it did in the beginning, but all together it sounded right. |