Why dont we ever listen to the unheard voices

by Stephanie Naylor   May 11, 2007


They speak a language
that no mortal can understand

telling of there pain and agony
to where they are now

to how the lay there in there coffin
in the world so deep

planning together
of there revenge

some of them try to warn us
of what is to come

but do we listen,
NO

we go along our merry ways
for we cannot hear there cries

they try and try
they shriek and they yell

till the day the demons
come to us and take our lives

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  • Wow this was nice. you portayed the emotion well. though it was short and the flow wasn't great, but otherwise another great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is a really good start! I love the last two lines the best. However, I think you could really add to this, and maybe change the order of the stanzas around. As it is, your thoughts seem a little unorganized and don't flow as well as they could. Another, smaller thing- You have some places where you use the wrong their,there,and they're.