This was different. The constant rhyme was really unique in it's own way. You picked gret words but to me the emotion kind of lacked. Love poems are not really my thing unless they hold true beauty and can touch my heart. The flow was good though. Good effort.~mel

I love this poem. it was so enjoyable to read. you know i'm was never too fond of love poems until recently, but this is great. keep writing! 5/5