Comments : Why Me

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I thought some of the thymes were really good, but some others were a little bit forced. The poem didn't seem to have any set rythem to it. Maybe try putting a pattern or rythem in to make the poem move along.

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    A good poem, a bit forced though, nice work