Okay, when I first saw this, I was like oh jeez, I don`t wanna read it . It was long lines then short lines, and the last line, may I add, I found was totally long for the rest of the poem, but `chu know what ? That abso`freakin`lutely rocked . Once I was done with the poem, I was like "Whoa . Now I feel dumb ."

You hace showed me this .
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Anyways, I love how this is so just iN YOUR FACE . Like this is what I have to say to you , so THERE ! It`s totally cool . I feel that it really portrays the whole "I love you, and you don`t love me . But does it look like I care ?"
Nicely done (: Just brilliant .
..__MiNDYY

A great poem with strongly worded meanings. Its impressive. 5/5. GOD BLESS U
With love
Fsams

Aww this is an awesome poem!!! it has so much emotion nd feelin in it!!!! i wish some1 cared about me like u've described lol
5/5
luv fallen

Ohh I love that poem. Intense emotion that drowns me into it. Awesome.

Great poem. I loved it.

Thats wonderfully written. so true. deff 5/5. great job!

xo kisses xo

... i added this to my favorites, i really like your poems because you seem to be able to say exactly what you mean and it is still beautiful. i wish i could do that.
it flowed so smoothly and you have a totally wonderful style. 5/5
gabriella

Thats a great poem.
its kinda sad but it has lots of emotion in it.
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xo.louiii

Ohh! i like it.. must have been written from the heart.. you can see it in this poem.. you have a real talent.. keep it up!

Although the structure of the poem isn't great.. who cares man? the way you end your poems is just really remarkable! i got tongue tied when you said "No matter what you say or do to me, I'll always be there for you, could this be the true meaning of I love you?" wow if someone said this to me.. I'd melt! another great piece!