Me

The simplicity of the poem, from the length, is perfect. I love that abruptness. and the feeling of this distance created between our past selves and our present and future selves is so true to everyone i think. The way we all think our lives will turn out differently is something that resonates with all of us. Nicely done

This poem is very good. :) I agree with Deana, I relate as well, and time passes too quickly. Great job on this piece. :) 5/5

Bri~

I can relate to this,wouldn`t it be nice if we could go back and start all over.time passes too quickly.