For him...<3

by M i s s B e v a n x   May 11, 2007


You say that you love me
and i say i hate you
you turn to your friends
and say i hate you too

cos i dont no when your joking
i really want you to die
all because you joke about me
and go 2 the point of a lie

why cant you just see my view
cos you know ill fall
i always try to text you
but you never try to call

i say that i hate you
but you no i mean love
why dont i just die
go to the heavens above

so this is for you
the 1 i think of all the time
if only you could see it my way
then perhaps youll be mine

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Lover Boii

    This is seemingly a trend in women due to the fact that my most recent ex- still does the same. She says she hates me just once a day and I still tell her I love her.

  • 17 years ago

    by M i s s B e v a n x

    Aww thanks or should i say thank's lol yh im shit at english so i didnt notice the puncuation lol but thank you!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Undoing

    That was good. Try changing your numbes, like '1', into 'one'. It looks more professional. Also, try to get all your contractions to work (cant = can't). Capitals on new sentances :).
    Other than the puncuation the poem had a good meaning, and really is sad.
    Kepp up the good work

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By M i s s B e v a n x