Great poem!
really....amazing flow....
the way u have stanzas longer than the other....gives a beat to the poem...
i have a few remarks though..
u need to use punctuation more...
and the last stanza is great...only the last line kinda ruins the flow...
"nothing could ever take his place"
i think thats better...
well in general its a definite 5/5...=D

This is a wonderful poem. I love it.

Well time may come....to realize and understand evrything so maybe she needs a time and space to to think all of her confusing mind... great showing and epxressing ur emotions.

Great poem...lovely work!...u expressed emotions deeply in this 1..and lol..the title itself wa attractive!....painful and it's touching..all in all....Nice write!...kp it up!..5/5!
xxPoojaxx

Wow, such strong emotion expressed here. I really felt dreadfully sorry for the persona.

I liked the flow, too. Despite the different length of the stanzas, it flowed really well.

Good job.

"Opening her soul, she begins to weep
Dreading all secrets she's forced to keep"

-Again, you have woven thematic terms wonderfully in this piece. You have a good sense of rhyme and are able to apply it well to your words and the message in this poem. Well done :).

''In every attempt to forget his face
Nothing could take his place ''

Those lines...wow. They blew me away, they were so intense and filled with so much depth.
Flow was once again flawless throughout the entire piece, the opening really pulled me in and from there on it just got better and better.
The ending was beautiful and elegant, really hit me hard.
The fact that this was formed poetry as well made me love it even more.