by x Mo x May 11, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Holding on to hope, |
*It's very cute and simple. I love it. |
That and simple. I love it. |
I think it's really good, the only thing I could say is add one more stanza that would kind of sum up the whole idea of the poem. I really like the story of it though. |
:) Nice poem.It's beautifully written. |
Godd poem. |