The beauty of the blade

by Malikai   May 11, 2007


There it is, so pretty
as it shines in perfect light
not a scratch, not a scar
this little blade has never marred

there it is, I see it
but it's just out of my reach
there it is, I see it
but I have to wait till mother's gone
or once again she'll be a spaz

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    Ok, I like the ending - it's funny, but I think that you should change a few words around. I, myself, am a writer as well - as your profile indicated that you were, but I think you can make out to be a great poet. I have not set my heart into writing poetry for a long time, because of what I am going through, but I can write without thinking - so maybe you can, too. :) I'll rate you a 5/5 because this poem is good, and I like the ending.

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