Ok, I like the ending - it's funny, but I think that you should change a few words around. I, myself, am a writer as well - as your profile indicated that you were, but I think you can make out to be a great poet. I have not set my heart into writing poetry for a long time, because of what I am going through, but I can write without thinking - so maybe you can, too. :) I'll rate you a 5/5 because this poem is good, and I like the ending.