I love this song. I don't know what else to say. I don't have any suggestions. I think it's perfect as it is.

I can really picture this being a song, so I guess that's good. The chorus was definitely good, perhaps the best part of the song. =)

Keep writing. Good job!

You take me far away,
To a place where I belong.
You write me random words,
And somehow turn them into a song.

^^^
I effing LOVED those lines. I wish I had thought of them. >=[

Anyways.

I really liked it, espically that first bit. It set a tune in my head and most "lyrics" on here don't do that. Congrats. It seemed just a little cliche, but it's ok. =-]

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Thank you for writing what i couldn't figure.. you're an inspiration.

"You kill me with silence,
And save me with tears.
Slowing breaking my heart,
Quickly urging my tears. "
Lovely choice of words!!....beautifully penned peice!!...the opening stanza was Amazing!!..loved it!..kp up de good work!...
xxPoojaxx

I love this one. it kinda reminds me of myself and the relationship im dealing with. it was well written and nicely put together. great job. 5/5 for me