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by david hollas   May 12, 2007


My computer just took a fit
And booted me offline
Im not always paranoid
But I think it is a sign.

Maybe things are happening
Plotting it may be
Aliens in outer space
Chasing after me.

It might be just the cider
Its difficult to tell
Things are muddled in my mind
I dont think all is well.

Bed might be an option
If I can make it there
Ill be going all alone
I no longer share.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lu

    My computer just took a fit
    And booted me offline
    Im not always paranoid
    But I think it is a sign.
    ^^^
    That was cute.
    When having a little cider our minds do seem to wander to the "hmmm what if's" .... lol

    The thing I like about funny poems is we can the first line and run with it where ever we want. From aliens invading our computers to cider invading our minds ... lol
    Anything is possible in a funny poem and no matter how ridiculous of an idea we run with ... people always love to read something funny.

    Nice read David .... a title came to mind after I read this

    Tales From the Cider Side .... could become a sequel ... lol

  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    All total excellent it was funny until the last
    line that made me feel sad

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Very good! Must have been good cider. This was very enjoyable to read, catchy timing.