Omg, thats so amazing, honey thats very good. i really like it and realte to it so much. you really cant pick your family but you can decide on your friends. xxxx

Someone that someone is
Proud of.

i am proud of you for writing this poem, it really is very good and i wish people could read this and realise your pain and your hurt.

hope you are ok, i am always here if you fancy a blether, and you keep writing with this excellent talent. take kare xxxxxxxxx

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed this, very captivating. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

I really like it. It expresses so much, and unlike some of the other poems on this site, yours has dept. Your a great poet.

Very good, I like it.
You're an extremely talented author.
The length of the poem really adds to it.