Finding A Way Back Into Love

by Italian Stallion   May 12, 2007


Watching the stars late at night,
With you by my very side.
Reflections of the moonlight,
On the water at low tide.

I am finding my way back into love,
It feels so good to be there once again.
Sitting here with you, glancing up above,
Reminds me of the times way back when.

Your very presence among mine,
Makes me shiver from deep within.
The love I have for you is divine,
And always has been.

I have been very lonesome for too long,
But now I'm finding my way back into love.
I owe it all to you, for helping me along.
I owe it all to you, for helping with this love song.

My heart is now together once again,
It took so long for my heart to mend.
But now I'm here once again,
Just like way back when.

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Yay. A little more length. Jk. But this one was again, beautiful. I can relate to your feelings and you expressed them amazingly. I think that the flow might of been off in a few minor areas but that could just be me. I still loved it though. Another beautiful one. Great job.

    Amber (:

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    This piece was... nice? But it didn't really catch my eye or draw me into t he poem. Maybe you could use stronger vocabulary to capture the reader. Just a thought. Ignore me if you wish.
    4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    The rhyming scheme was nice and added to the wonderful flow of the poem. The word choice was very good and painted a nice picture. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    The topic was cute and so was the poem.
    From a moderator, I was expecting it
    To be beautiful.
    It just seemed "normal"
    Nothing more, nothing less
    Nothing really caught my eye.
    It was just.... cute?
    The flow was okay
    Your wording was perfect by the way.
    I do have to admit that.
    All in all.
    I give you a four :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I really liked it, i have read some of your other work and i personally love your writing

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