Ok I read some of your work and I like the flow but you seem to have little power behind your work. I mean some thing to make the reader think or ponder to give a clear picture of what your tring to get across. Most of your work is of Love, thats not bad but if you could put more power instead of fluff I think your work would be more enjoyable at least to me well I said my piece I am what ever you think I am but thats my honest opinion. Plot121

I really liked it, i have read some of your other work and i personally love your writing

The topic was cute and so was the poem.
From a moderator, I was expecting it
To be beautiful.
It just seemed "normal"
Nothing more, nothing less
Nothing really caught my eye.
It was just.... cute?
The flow was okay
Your wording was perfect by the way.
I do have to admit that.
All in all.
I give you a four :]

The rhyming scheme was nice and added to the wonderful flow of the poem. The word choice was very good and painted a nice picture. I gave it a 5/5.

This piece was... nice? But it didn't really catch my eye or draw me into t he poem. Maybe you could use stronger vocabulary to capture the reader. Just a thought. Ignore me if you wish.
4/5

Yay. A little more length. Jk. But this one was again, beautiful. I can relate to your feelings and you expressed them amazingly. I think that the flow might of been off in a few minor areas but that could just be me. I still loved it though. Another beautiful one. Great job.

Amber (: