Comments : Forever Midnight

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    Wow! Your talent amazes me. This is so intense. It pulled me right in. The imagery is excellent.

    Forever lost in depths of darkness
    To crush the light that tries to breathe
    Inside the shadows of the sorrow
    That clings to every part of me.

    This stanza is awesome. I rellay related to these words. Great job!
    Take care
    Love Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    This was so beautiful! It's been a long time since I've read your work (even though you're in my favorites) but now I realize how much I miss it! Truly fantastic imagry. Wonderful job! :) Keep it up!
    ~Midnight Sun