CANT SAVE ME

by lizzle   May 12, 2007


THEY DON'T T UNDERSTAND!
THAT THIS IS WHAT I DO!
THERES NOTHING IN THE WORLD THAT
CAN STOP P ME NO T EVEN U!!!
THERES NO WORDS U CAN SAY!
CUZ I NO ITS NOT GHANA BE OK!!!
I ALREADY KNOW THE PAIN WONT STOP!
F U C K THE WORLD!!! GOD JUST LET ME DROP!!!
SHE CANT HELP THOUGH SHE HAS TRIED!
U MIGHT ASWEL JUST SAY I DIED!!!
SHE THINKS HER WORDS ARE ONES
OF COMFORT!!! SHE CANT SEE THAT I'M ALREADY DEAD!
I DON'T KNOW WHY DON'T GET IT THROUGH HER HEAD!
THAT I'M TO DEEP!!I TS JUST TO STEEP!!
GOD JUST PUT ME TO A PERMANENT SLEEP!!
NO ONE CAN STOP THESE TEARS THAT FALL!IT DOESN'T
HELP TO TEL ME TO STAND TALL!!!
CUZ NO MATTER WHAT THIS GIRL CRIES!
TO THE VERY F U C KI N G DAY SHE DIES!!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Ok.. that was a bit hard to read.. maybe if you dont use all caps and space it out in stanzas that might help. other then that it was good. maybe not using slang words either like "dat" or other ones.. it was pretty good the flow was a bit off also.

  • 17 years ago

    by fatal bliss is the best way to die

    Big words but it was good snds like me good job:)

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