I felt so "wow, this is so great"...i'm completely amazed...it's so wonderful...

I really enjoyed reading this poem as it has true meaning of the art of poetry. you have done a great job. keep it up.
you are truly an amazing writer....
a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Its romanting. the flow of words was good. you used very nice and loely words in your poem take care

This lol is a lovely poem buti still in shock at your age and your feeling this lol???

xxx alex xxx

This was a beautiful poem! i enjoyed reading this one! well written keep it up!

Wow, full of emotion. If this is
true..you're only 12. But anyways
The second to last stanza should be
reduced to fit and match the other
stanzas lines. Keep up the great work.
<3Tay(^_^)
God bless 5/5

Well wriiten the word choice was great, and the flow was flawless, the emtion was clear. You did an excellent job on this one 5/5

Wow!!..very sweet poem...but..lol...jusat 12 n u've penned this one so properly...i mean portrayed emotions in such a real manner...
Great work!
Kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Great Experiment.

&hearts;,
Delicious 42

This poem really speaks to me. Like it really paints a picture of whats going on and the way you wrote it... was deep. You can sense the intimacy and emotions going on as the story continues. Your pretty talented. Feel free to message me anytime =]]

Girl I really hate you right now. ok fine i don't HATE you but I am mad that you write better poems than i do

Wow, I'm impressed with this one. I can't believe you so young. You have a remarkable talent. Keep it up. 5/5

marcella

Scandaloussssss
haha
but i loved it.....it was crazy good:) 5/5 and this is added to my favorites