Excellent poem, I really enjoyed this, very captivating. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Awww again very sweet one:) Had a lot of emotion in it. Maybe the flow wasnt the best but it was good:) Keep up the great work!

There are a million girls out there
But there's only one who exist in my eyes
I could spend the night with a hundred girls
But there's only one who exist in my eyes..

Oh!!...sooo cute....lovely work......beautiful choice og words which add to the intensity of the poem...kp it up!!
xxPoojaxx

I thought that this was a lovely love poem. I really don't see anything wrong with it; it has a great flow and wonderful word choice. 5/5

5/5 THIZ POEM WAZ REALLY GOOD...NOBODI SHOULD LEAVE A BAD COMMENT B-CUZ THIZ POEM WAZ EXCELLENT....I LOVED READING IT....KEEP DOING WHAT U DO CUZ U DO IT O SO WELL

MUCH LUV
PEACHEZ

In the paragraph there are millions, I thought the wording was abit redundent you said the same thing twice. It left the flow abit off the way you expressed your emotion was good. Abit too submissive for me but it was done well. Plot121

This one was really sweet.. I loved your ending stanza

"Since you've left.. The stars won't fall
I'm a lonely prince without a lovely mistress..
I promise I'll love you until I die
I'll fight for you until the end"

So sweet and powerful.. Very emotional your poems are.. Your words choice is amazing.

Continue posting. It's not exactly easy writing love poems, but you do it pretty well.

Anyhow, great work. keep it up. 5/5
~Ally~

I love you choice of words once again XD. The flow worked with me personally but overall I thought it was excellent.

I thought it was great, again your choice of words is on the dot, i love the emotion, so keep up the good work

Aww, Marco. This was a lovely piece with a number of poetic techniques woven within your words (you have a girlfriend, don't you!) Haha :). Anyway, again, you've made a good effort with this piece, and considering this is your second love poem, you've done a reasonable job! :). However, there are minor things, but I think these are just typos.

"But there's only one who exist in my eyes"- just put an 's' after the 'exist' in both places you've written this line.

"I could spend the night with a hundred girls"-you could change this to, "I could spend my nights with each and every one of them". This way, you'll be enforcing your message a lot more effectively.

"Tears roll down on my face"- you can take out the 'on', it will make this line far more effective.

And finally: "Since you've left.. The stars won't fall,"- you don't need the ‘ve’ after the 'you’ and you should change the ‘won’t’ into ‘don’t’.

Like I said before, a well penned piece with strong use of repetition, flow and imagery. Well done :).

"Please give me a chance.. And I'll show you"
^ Was a bit long for the stanza.
^^ That was all through-out the poem, sweetie. The length ( syllables ) has a lot to do with the flow, but overall you did a great job. It was really, really sweet. :D
Keep up the great work.

Try not to use I, You, and yours so much, other than that, the flow was a little off, but for a love poem is was captivating, love poems don't really grab my attention, but this one did. 5/5

I really enjoyed the repeition you used in this, I thought it worked very well.
Flow was good for the most part, but the fillers (I, you, and etc) sometimes disrupted it a little.
Other than that however, this was beautifully and elegantly written.

Wow how beautiful! i loved every stanza! the flow was amazing, and you have a way with words =o]! thanx also =o]

Very awesoe poem. I've always like rhyming is the ABCB pattern. That's just me. Also, I think I agree with sluvios but I like your poem a lot over all. Very sad.