"Disturbed with life, no words live on
Poetry here, now crawling to dawn
Faraway flames search the sky
Out of water, creatures with crystal eyes
What God-sent secret lie in disguise"

Great work!!...excellently penned..u seem to hand all this kinda topics very well!!..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

That was very strong, with raw emotions. I really liked it.
5/5

Great poem, you do well with the whole rhyming scheme! I like the basis and content of the poem as well, great work!

It was your great work .. you words shows the beauty. take care

This was a delightful read. I find a few forced lines on some areas, whereas I enjoyed the fine imagery you created on this one. I loved how the 'subject', in the midst of turmoil and such-to, is still passionate with a God-given gift--Poetry. :) Nicely done, nonetheless. 5/5

Marian

Not sure your style here, but you are very descriptive. Nice.