Sweet, I bet your mother is happy and proud to have you post a poem about her. The flow was good, the word choice was alright, and the emtion were strong 5/5

Another great poem by a great poet.
it is really well written as yes our moms deserve even more than that from us, i like the way you are telling us what is your mom to you, so beautifuly done. you always amaze me with your words. Happy mother s day to all of the moms.

I love the repition "she is my" through out in your poem love you mum. always. take care

Great poem from you..lovely work...your mom must be very proud to have a wonderful child like you...excellent work!!.lovely,meaningful,intense and perfect....Happy mother's day to all the lovely mothers...
xxPoojaxx

Awww YAY!
I love my mom as well.
I think you did a great job
Showing how amazing
moms can be.
I love this poem!
Great dedication

Great poem i hope ur mom liked it 5/5

I liked it.
I'm not much into non-rhyming poems, but the fact that you can write so highly about your mother is enough for me.
You could feel the emotion, though the flow lacked a bit.
Nicely done, over all.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Amazing poem, excellently written. Keep up the fantastic work. Check out some o my poems.

Best Wishes
Wallace

This was a great poem dedicated to im sure a beautiful lady. I liked how it was none ryhming but still held strong emotion which was portrayed nicely.Well done~mel

This is a special poem , I lost my mum when I was 19 she was a very special person I miss her everyday Steve

Aww this is so sweet ;) I bet your mom really enjoyed reading this one. Anyway I don't like short poems but this one is beautiful well done! It flowed well too. 5/5! keep up the good work!

This was sweet. good job.
Bree

It's awesome. I'm a little late though. It's father's day. Well it's about to come up soon. Great job. 5/5
-vino

This piece endears me completely. I wish my mother was there to witness my growth.

A very sweet tribute, nonetheless.

-Marian

This is beautiful!
Such a beautiful dedication, filled with so much meaning and emotion, I'm sure this means a lot to your mother.

Gosh, i wish i could say the same about my mum.. Very well written
5/5
.x

Nicely penned, very sweet and emotional.
My favorite lines are:
-She is my angel and my witness;
Through all my ups and downs!-
Well done, 5/5 from me

This was a really sweet and touching poem. You wrote it really well. Nice flow, structure and rhymes. Beautiful write! 5/5

marcella

Sweet... You expressed emotions greatly and you wrote this piece beautifully.
She is my angel and my witness;
Through all my ups and downs!
^this two lines are greatest. 5/5

This is a simple poem really but you made it extra ordinary sweet. i love it.. your so sweet to write a poem for your mom. great poem.