How sweet. I like this poem. I'm glad
you have a good relationship
with your mother. :)
Thanks for commenting my work.
I give this a 5/5!!

Very beautiful and lovely poem. I love my mother so much as you do and this piece reminded me of my mother. 5/5 for your lovely words

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Fsams

Good job, great poem with strong wording and excellent atmosphere. Well done!5/5

This poem made me smile :) it has great wording and emotion well done
xx

This is a lovely poem. the wording and emotion that you put in it is perfect. 5/5

Kalee

Aww. so sweet! great job. I love the emotion that was put into it. <33!
5/5

I thought it was sweet, i bet your mum is proud and happy to have you as a daughter. i thought it was the nicest poem for a mum that i have ever read, and yes we spell mum with a u, lol. it's weird. anyways 5/5

nikki

This poem is a little weird. The stanzas are really short and the rhyming isn't so well also. try better next time 4/5

I'm glad you took the time to appreciate your mother and all she has done and will continue to do for you. mothers get so little credit for the things they do, I hope you let her read this :) Great work 5/5 GG23

This is a sweet poem which I really have enjoyed reading. Though I think you should change the title as it gives everything about the poem away so easily. If it was a different title I wouldn't of known the ending would be about your mother because you set it up so perfectly and it was almost like supsense. Overall still a great read with a beautiful dedication. Well done. ~Mel

This was beautiful. It made me think of my mother and appreaciate all shes done for me and after I leave you this I am going to go give her a big ole hug. I loved the flow of this and the emotions you described. Well done *5/5*

Wow this is amazing cause a mother should have at least some thing to read once in a while

This is lovely, and very cute :)
I wrote a poem about my mom a while back... I think you've inspired me to upload it too :P
I like the structure of it, it's nice flowing.

Awwww, this was a very sweet poem, i liked the flow and the emotions through out this all. Overall it was a really great read

a well deserved 5/5

Stephanie Naylor

Nice poem...very sweet..im sure your mom would love it.5/5

I liked it.
The love was shown and it flowed well.

"She's my whisper of the leaves;
As i walk down the street!"

^^My favourite lines.
Well done 4/5

Good job..so touching!!>.5/5

I love this piece!!! it has a great dedication to all the son and daughters.. keep up the good work 5/5