by Sydney
You call it love, you say perfect is he not..Is that a question? just wondering XD. I like it overall. And the last line i like as well ^_^ |
by Kaila
HAHA |
by Taylor Lyn
The message of this poem is great...I think you could reword it a little bit for a more drastic impact, but I definitely like your poem! I will definitely be reading more of your works! |
"I see perfection without my eyes |
by Debbie
I love your theme message. Something you see through the other person's imperfections... transposed by time into perfections... in the end, it's what we all called love... The fact that, although this person isn't that good-looking, you see his soul "sizzling hot" made an impression to me that you must've liked this person....made me chuckle, but, it strikes a chord with me! Hmm... it made me think as well, and I learned something with these lines: |
by nai
Beautiful poem, such a nice way to see somebody. enjoyed reading this. |