Making a Difference

by alinaXonly1   May 12, 2007


By each and everyday that passes,
pondering each moment about what to do.
Thinking will he ever notice me?
Waiting and waiting for him to come to me.
But one day, I noticed that NOTHING will happen unless,
"I MAKE A DIFFERENCE".
By me making a change,
things will turn out the way,
I want them to when I take a step up...

by-alina
*plz give feedbacks, to help me improve.this is my first poem to submit.*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I really like the message in this
    its a beautiful message that everyone should hear <3
    and because of this, i'd love to see this in more depth, and longer (:

    take care!
    keep on writing (:

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Uhm
    ok

    listen

    frist you must cut int 4 line paragraph or stanza

    dont make 1 big blick of wirtting , it wil not be good for a eye to read

    second work more on the rhyming of your poem ,

    i wont vote it now till you fix so you deserve the good grade

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    I really like this one. Just please do my one favor, never change yourself for someone else. If they don't like you for who you are, that's their problem, and they're not right in the head. Great poem. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by payal

    Hey gurl this is payal i am a member now to so comment me to... me thingy is truelove07 okay go on it and read mines to....

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