Not bad hun.. keep it up!

I totally disagree with the person who commented before me, I think she was just looking for a comment award.

Although, this is a poem, that may be all it is.

It could even be a quote, it is very short, and I don't think that the caps lock is very appealing. I suggest you please edit it and remove caps lock, maybe that would improve the poem

Keep posting though.

I LOVE ALL UR POEMS THEY ARE REALLY GOOD.......I WISH I COULD ME THAT GOOD TOO

I loved your poem it was really good