by Vanessa May 12, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Little is the girl, whose alone and crying |
Wow! another really good one! more goosebumps! really loved this one! (though you might like to know, the 1st lin of the 2nd last stanza... i think you mean 'the' not 'to') |
Whose = who's |
WOW great write sad but you did very good and the flow was great, wish all of us had that when we really needed it ,at least there was a happy one out of this one,keep up the good work,your friend Tracy |
This poem brought tears to my eyes.. i like this very much. i been through something like this b4...awsome job 5/5 |
5/5 excellent poem. you have great talent. i really liked the ending where some good deeds came from it. its really touching and sad that there are children that live that way. |