This was a sweet poem. it was calm and soothing and gentle and truthful. but it doesnt reviel much and it makes the reader want to read on. good work.

How adorable! I'm quite fond of Marilyn Monroe, and it seems politics has to do with her mysterious death. Other than that, I really loved how you developed this poem well. It's more like a prose poem, whereas you portrayed the "subject" vividly. Wonderful write, as always, my dear! Thank you for sharing. Love, Debbie

Oh god yeah! she was amazing, even such a small flaw as drugs didint diminish her beauty, her sensuality nor kind nature towards others, she will always be missed :(
as for the poem :) beautifull just like you, tellme how do you keep doing it? writing such materpieces :) 99/5

Gem
Excellent job on this piece. Your imagery is wonderful. You have caught her life in verse in such a classy style.
~CLAP~CLAP~
Love Cindy

Yeh im agree with cindy . its so good work. by the way your all poems are good i like that all. and you are my favourites. take care

Aww i loved this, you know your one amazing writer right? well you are :p

Great piece as always, keep up the fantastic work Gem ^^

5/5

I loved it.
The flow was flawless and the imagery was great.

'The brightest of stars in the Hollywood world
A strong sexy woman yet a sweet little girl
But even though Marilyn Monroe may be gone
In Hollywood's heart, her star twinkles on'

Beautiful 5/5

[Sarah]

Ohhh I absolutely adore this poem, my favourite part was the last stanza, I found it to be so sweet and it made me smile.
Flow, as always is flawless and the im,agery you used creates vivid pictures.

Gem

I cant believe you wrote a poem about her. I love Marilyn. She was fab, the ultimate icon. She led quite a unhappy life but always had that smile and giggle. Your poem captures her brilliantly, wonderful, i adore this piece of work form you. Take care
(5/5 if i could give more i defo would :))

Kelly
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Very good poem, everyone of you poems are so wonderfully written the way you put ur words together just right its very good your a great writer 5/5

Wow. This is amazing. The flow of this, made it so easy to read, and the description made beautiful imagery in my mind. Your rhyming worked so well with each line, flowing on perfectly. It has a touch of sad emotion in it, yet finishes with a happy ending. You definately have a lot of talent there. Well done. =] 5/5 definately.

Tammie

Who would've thought of writing a poem on Marilyn Monroe and have an amazing outcome.
Keep it up. You rock!

Brilliant poem. Yet another poem to be proud of. You captured the essence of Marilyn so beautifully. 5/5 for sure.

Keep up the fantastic work.

Josie

Great poem and such an original outlook on that title! Very very creative! Loved every bit in flow and rhyme!
Charisma*