I'll Show You

by Anne Garcia   May 13, 2007


I don ' t want to listen
To what you ' re going to say
I won ' t pay attention
Because I hear it everyday

So why don ' t you leave
I don ' t want to see you anymore
Not one of your words will I believe
So why don ' t you just walk out the door

I won ' t be your door mat
And let you walk all over me
No you won ' t treat me like that
Because I ' ll make you see

I ' ll show you who I really am
I ' ll show you what I can be
I ' ll show you that I can
And what I ' ll do, just so you would see

I will fly across the clear blue sky
And I ' ll paint a whole new rainbow
I ' ll stop the time from flying by
So that our fun will never go

I ' ll stop the waves from crashing in the sand
And I ' ll stop the wind going through the trees
I ' ll show you where I stand,
I ' ll show you, you ' ll see

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  • 17 years ago

    by Anti Mankind

    A
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    B

    Is always a good way to make a poem.

    I think most people are familiar with this type of rhymescheme, it's wonderful is it not?

    Anyway, good poem. I don't know whether or not this is in the right section, but good poem still.

    Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by lizzle

    That was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i loved it!!!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    "I will fly across the clear blue sky
    And I'll paint a whole new rainbow
    I'll stop the time from flying by
    So that our fun will never go."
    Wow!!...lovely lines...beautifully penned and wonderful flow too....very vivid description..kp up the good work!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by geeeeee

    I will fly across the clear blue sky
    And I ' ll paint a whole new rainbow
    I ' ll stop the time from flying by
    So that our fun will never go.

    I really liked that stanza, it was descriptive and it had a pretty good flow to it. If only we could stop time aye! Great poem :]

    Take Care

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