I will fly across the clear blue sky
And I ' ll paint a whole new rainbow
I ' ll stop the time from flying by
So that our fun will never go.

I really liked that stanza, it was descriptive and it had a pretty good flow to it. If only we could stop time aye! Great poem :]

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"I will fly across the clear blue sky
And I'll paint a whole new rainbow
I'll stop the time from flying by
So that our fun will never go."
Wow!!...lovely lines...beautifully penned and wonderful flow too....very vivid description..kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

That was great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i loved it!!!!! 5/5

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Is always a good way to make a poem.

I think most people are familiar with this type of rhymescheme, it's wonderful is it not?

Anyway, good poem. I don't know whether or not this is in the right section, but good poem still.

Keep up the good work.