Oh the message thru out this poem was great!! well done and keep writing.

5/5 David

Wonderful message. I like the word choice, and the emtion is powerful. great job. 5/5

The message was great in this poem well done on writing about this topic it was interesting capturing and inspiring. One thing though you need to do is capitlize your "I's" Other then that everything else seemed sport on. Good effort and creative.~mel