That was great. i like it. great job. =)

Lovely peom ...well written ...just wow

Through all this my spirit had died
I stood so tall yet wept inside

Drowning in sorrow, fear and lies
Shadowed in darkness with empty eyes

My breaking heart could take no more
With every step my soul had tore

Yet I wear my mask for you all to see
A perfect person, a perfect me

And I wanna relate the last stanza of one of my poems 'silence' i.e.

I do not know what I've to do
My eyes are silent and lips too
My silent eyes do not say what I mean
They remain silent to cover the scene !
5/5
Cheers
Biya