No one knows

by bleeding limegrenn   May 13, 2007


No one knows
no one knows how much i love you
no one knows how bad it herts
no one knows wut there doing
no one knows it bothers me
no one knows and no one cares
no one knows the pain in side

No One Knows

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Good job
    you had some gramatical errors that need to be fixed
    the poem was okay not your best
    but it wasn't bad

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm... no one knows unless u have told them..hehehe but ilove the message its such a wonderful and quite interesting..at the same time it reminds me something.. nice job5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Good poem. It is a little short but thats ok for this one. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Good work..but short..the repetition has added beauty to ur work...but i found a few spelling errors..if u correct tht..ur poem will look a lot better
    xxPoojaxx

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