Good work..but short..the repetition has added beauty to ur work...but i found a few spelling errors..if u correct tht..ur poem will look a lot better
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Good poem. It is a little short but thats ok for this one. 5/5

Hmm... no one knows unless u have told them..hehehe but ilove the message its such a wonderful and quite interesting..at the same time it reminds me something.. nice job5/5

Good job
you had some gramatical errors that need to be fixed
the poem was okay not your best
but it wasn't bad