Wow, that is a sad poem, I'm SO sorry if that happened to you...its a beautiful poem, full of emotion, I thought the flow was off a tad, but it was an amazing and touching poem...I'm sorry if that happened to you....... 5/5
Sky....

Oh that is a sad poem. that is sad. I felt as if I was there. and it is a poem many can relate too. great job though.

Wow that ws intense a scary story and so sad 5/5 you wrote it well! it was full of emotion adn again so sad but true this could happen to anyone!

This is a really sad story. The poem is full of powerful emotions. The flow at the end was a little off, but it's still a good poem. In the last line of the 9th stanza, shouldn't it be learn? Anyway, great write. 5/5

marcella

I thought this poem was very good i can relate to it i lost my cousin because he drove drunk