I liked it, its like your in the mind of them both, and it gives a sense of what you are really talking about, 5/5

I liked the poem it read fine I like the edscriptions in this and the flow was done well I will give my opinion on what you should call it on your message board Plot121

Again this is not one of my favorites butit still flows well. there is great structure. you could have made a better picture in the readers mind. otherwise 5/5

I liked this one alot, the flow was amazing, the word choice was brillant, and the emtion was really strong. there is no way I could think of anything to better this poem it is perfect just like it is perhaps a favorit of the day. 5/5

I really enjoyed this one. The flow of the poem was really brilliant, the structure was good. I liked how you kinda split the first stanza into three parts... i would suggest you put stanzas there but i understand why you didnt. Anyways your vocabulary in the poem was brilliant. The poem had this steady rhythem going on with it. Really enjoyable. I liked how you kinda did a whole personification with this poem, i loved the whole idea of it. With a serial killer as depression. Brilliant. A really great peace, i suggest you use punctuation as it will help your poem be read as you want it to be read if that makes sense. Keep writing though. xx

I like this one alot.. i can feel da emotion. great job 5/5.. by the way, can u comment my one poem call

concert?
i cant find ne1 who would really get it cause i see no fam here.. mmfwcl

Loved this 1...very perfect filled wth deep emotions..n i loved the way u've ended it...very effective manner...n the flow was also good..kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

Visually apathetic....
but emotional like an undiscovered bodyfarm
gets a HELL YEAH...from me...

I had to read it twice to fully understand it. There is so much in just one little poem. It seems to me like you put a lot of effort into this???? I really like it. Great job! 5/5

~Kat~

I liked it, the way you described that there is more than one type of murder was brilliant, i love the way your words melt together, nice work

A common topic, but an original approach! I think this was written very cleverly. The rhythm was strange and musical -- overall a very good piece.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N