Aspects of Love (Acrostic)

by Italian Stallion   May 13, 2007


A beautiful young women
Stands upon thy very self
Pondering thoughts of love
Excitedly awaiting
Choking on excitement, for
The love she holds within her hands
Shines down upon thyself

On this gloriously filled day
Finding love will be an easy feat

Looking down from the heavens above
Overlooking the search for her love
Veering far away from
Enchanted love memories

*Written for a contest*

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. Pretty straight forward, no rhyme scheme or syllable count.
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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Awehhh! I adore your acrostics, lol. They're all so good. I love the word choice in this poem as well, not so easy with an acrostic to make it still hold the same depth as a normal poem...but you did a great job on it..and guess what? For the first time I didn't find something to nag about! Which is very unlike me, I always look for something in every poem, lol..:P .

    5.5
    :]

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    The word choice was great because it was different. The flow as always was very nice and I liked that it was a acrostic poem. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell

    Wonderfully written,
    great job!
    keep it up!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    I enjoyed this, Joe.
    I'm not a fan of acrostic so much.
    But this was enough to keep me entertained.

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    I always love reading Acrostic poems because its fun to see how people make sense of them, and how well they can do it! I really like yours, 5/5 from me and I hope you won your contest!