by Italian Stallion May 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
A beautiful young women |
Awehhh! I adore your acrostics, lol. They're all so good. I love the word choice in this poem as well, not so easy with an acrostic to make it still hold the same depth as a normal poem...but you did a great job on it..and guess what? For the first time I didn't find something to nag about! Which is very unlike me, I always look for something in every poem, lol..:P . |
by Brittany C
The word choice was great because it was different. The flow as always was very nice and I liked that it was a acrostic poem. I gave it a 5/5. |
Wonderfully written, |
by Prophecies In Kodak
I enjoyed this, Joe. |
by Taylor Lyn
I always love reading Acrostic poems because its fun to see how people make sense of them, and how well they can do it! I really like yours, 5/5 from me and I hope you won your contest! |