Is it okay?

by Bittersweet Sundown   May 13, 2007


My lips are like heroin,
Much like a sin.
They're very addicting,
Not like any other thing.

My eyes shine a bright blue,
Everytime I see you.
They glisten in the sunlight,
You don't see anything else in sight.

My touch is a warm embrace,
Something no other girl could replace.
It sends shivers down your spine,
And you wonder why you're mine.

All I can do is say,
You're perfect in every way.
And I was wondering, is it okay,
Is it okay, if I take your breath away?

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  • 16 years ago

    by vanillasky

    Wickedly beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I generally love this poem!!!! it is just so .... heart felt and loving ... and just one word WOW!!!! love it ..... its definately going into my favourites ... lol

    fav stanza:
    All I can do is say,
    You're perfect in every way.
    And I was wondering, is it okay,
    Is it okay, if I take your breath away?

  • 17 years ago

    by Nathan Turner

    I loovveeeee this :D
    such description :)

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