My Mother

Wow this is such a sweet poem. my mother is the same way she would give up everything and anything in order to make sure me and my sister are happy and healthy. I'm glad that your mother is the same way. This poem shows a very strong woman. Such a sweet tribute. The only critique I have is the last line, "I'd die rather" I know its set up that way to make it rhyme but it doesnt sound right.

Great poem thou :):)..
it very touching one and great job pall

for sure our mom's mean so much to us and you pall you show it :):):):)... i dont have any thing to say but (wonderfull):):):)..

keep on :)

This is soo good!! And soo sweet!
peace

Aw, such a beautiful and wonderful write you have wrote for your mother. I know I'm late on this comment. I finally have time. But well done. Really, any mother that would read this would be proud. Keep up the awesome work! God bless 5/5
<3Tay(^_^)

Weird!! its okay though x