by Vanessa May 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The baby now four, the mother eighteen |
Wow! I love theses 3 poems. |
Wow, these three poems are amazing. Great job vanessa |
Vanessa, I loved the way you kept it all together in the three parts, Excellent talent and the flow was great,glad it all turned out to be a happy ending,keep up the good work, your friend Tracy |
5/5, i like this one too. very great poem~ |
by Marc Ortiz
Oh my god.. Amazing poem! I would be happy to read part 4 if you're going to make one! :) PM me okay?! I love the happy ending! its like a cycle :) you're really talented I enjoyed reading all three of them! A very moving poem! keep it up! 5/5! |