Perfect.. Such a rough life she lead.. im happy that it turned out wonderful. you did a wonderful job on all three of these.. 5/5

Very very nice story. i dont know why a tear came from my eyes while reading this poem good work 5

A beutiful ending to such a sad life story. I loved all three parts. I like this one the most. Keep up the great work. I hope to see more poems like this soon. 5/5

Wow, this one is great too, and such a good way to end the trilogy, nice job, your such a great writer

All of the poems abused child 1,2,3 all speak out to everyone. they make you cry even smile and you know that things like this happen everyday. great work.5/5

What more can anyone ever say then DAMN!!!
That was such a great story the flow was perfect and the message was great. You should pat yourself on the back for this PERFECT JOB!!! I don't say this often Plot121

AHH you are seriously un-stopable that was incredible all of them were just amazing. LOVED THEM!!! well done once again, perfect is not a word i use much but these three poems were perfect and flawless and so beautiful well done!!

Aw such a wonderful end to such a sad beginning.. when I read the first two I was very worried that this one would have a terrible ending but it didnt it was wonderful. Its very inspiring(sp?) to know that even people with so much against them are able to rise against it and stay strong.. Nice work.

I thought it was over, I thought I was threw-Through
Tears slipped out the connor of her eye-corner

Apart from those spelling errors, I think this was the best one of the triolgy.
Every stanza was so intense and hard hitting, with depth and emotion screaming through the words.
Flow is flawless throughout, imagery again was a pleasure to read and the word choice and rhyme scheme are enjoyable.
Once more, my favourite part was the end, you managed to turn something to heartbreaking into hope, and that was nice to see.

You did a wonderful job on these, you should be proud.

I didn't want to comment you till i read them all i lloved them they are great,and so true i can relate to them i wish though that i could write as good as you do 5/5 totaly

Oh my god.. Amazing poem! I would be happy to read part 4 if you're going to make one! :) PM me okay?! I love the happy ending! its like a cycle :) you're really talented I enjoyed reading all three of them! A very moving poem! keep it up! 5/5!

5/5, i like this one too. very great poem~

Vanessa, I loved the way you kept it all together in the three parts, Excellent talent and the flow was great,glad it all turned out to be a happy ending,keep up the good work, your friend Tracy

Wow, these three poems are amazing. Great job vanessa

Wow! I love theses 3 poems.
You really should write a part four.
Wow.
Amazing, i almost cried. Your going on my favorites.
Amazing job.
Keep it up!