Please Help me, LORD

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   May 13, 2007


Dear LORD, please help me
throughout my life..
Please guide me in my
walk with you, and
comfort my every cry.

Dear LORD, please help me
have the faith to live
for you and help me to
serve you with my whole
heart, for only you.

Dear LORD, please help me
to have the strength to
stand up for what's right.
I will try to not give
up without a fight.

Dear LORD, please help me
to witness to the lost
souls, plant seeds where
they are needed, for the
gospel is my job to share.

Help me, LORD, please.

I know the flow isn't great, but I liked the message I was writing about. Tell me what you guys think, please. =)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    Sweetheart , you don't need a comment on this one, it is a prayer! the only bad prayers are the neglected ones.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    For being a religious poem it is well done. Being a servant to God and people was the most driving message here. The christians would be profoundly delighted good job. Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    Really good, I'm christian so I liked this one.

    5/5

    ~*Alex*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I also found the meaning to be great in this poem, The flow was a little off but overall it really didnt bring the poem down at all. I found how you started each stanza with the same line made it really capturing because the repetion was strong. Well done on this~mel

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