I really liked the meaning you portayed throughout this poem the emotions were great and i think you showed them well. The one thing i have to say though is i found your word ryhmes too commen if that makes sense, like ryhming "be" with "me" i think if you expanded the words it would make this poem much more interesting to read but i cannot vote low for something like that when i enjoyed this poem alot. well done~mel

Aww so loving sister you are. Flow was great and loved the emotions you have put in it. I can relate to it also.Sad but an amazing write! 5/5 Keep up the great work! :)

Hey,
an awesome poem, I like the second stanza and especially the first line of that stanza: I'm not perfect, I've done my fair share of wrong..
keep up the good work 5/5
kisses stephanie

I loved this poem a great deal, the best poem I think you have done from what I read. The message was wonederful and it made you think of your own life. But The biggest lesson would have to be, to leave others to thier own destiny. You may suggest what to do but in the end its thier own decision. Plot121

Ally my sweet friend , you are a treasure to all who know you! You care so deeply and you give so much to all in need.
Just keep giving guidance to those in need and when it is their time to understand. they will come to know the true depths of its meaning. Always remember:---- If nobody gives of themselves, then emptiness abounds-- --beautiful poem sweetie 5/5...JIM