I don't think I can.
This, to me, is a work of art.
I usually criticize people
On the smallest of stuff.
But on this poem, m'dear.
I cannot.
But this is me being easy on you.
Because it IS your first time.
Next time I comment.
It won't be so nice :p

Hey,
nice poem, i have a poem out about friends too, they look a like =)
what should we do without friends?
good flow and i enjoyed reading it 5/5
kisses stephanie

"A friend is.....
Someone who will encourage you.
They'll try not to discourage you."

That part was really sweet. It reminded me of my best friend Sarah! *tear*

5/5

~*Alex*~