Do you feel the same way?

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   May 13, 2007


The sweetness in your breath,
when you say "I love you"

Do you feel that way for me?

The lovingness in your touch,
when you wrap your arms around me.

For you feel it too?

The trueness in your eyes,
when you look into mine.

Do you get that same feeling?

The joyfullness in your laugh,
when you laugh at me.

Mm, won't ask if you feel the same way.
Anyhow, where was I? Oh!!

The gentleness in your kiss,
when you sweetly kiss me.

Do you feel that spark?

The kindness in your heart,
when for me you do so many things.

Do you love me like I love you?

The feeling of missing you,
when you aren't near.

Do you miss me too?

Forever and Always,
I will love you..

But will you love me too?

Okay, so the whole thing about the stanza

"The Joyfullness in his laugh,
when he laughs at me"

I know you guys probably won't think it's so funny, but it tis an inside joke between me and my boyfriend.
Anyhow, feel free to criticize. =) Thanks for reading.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This is really sweet i enjoyed it alot and found it quite cute to read. Well done on a nicely written poem~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    This ones sweet.

    ~*Alex*~

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Awww..chhoo chweeeet.....Very cute!!...Amazing work!!.....Great job!
    Kp writing!...Luved this 1!!..easy 5/5 for such a sweet poem!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww little humor in this sweet poem :) I think it was great how you played with the doubtness(if that is even a word)! Amazing write. Keep up the great work! :) 5/5

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