by Hidden Feelings within these Words May 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
The sweetness in your breath, |
by Melpomene
This is really sweet i enjoyed it alot and found it quite cute to read. Well done on a nicely written poem~mel |
by Alex
This ones sweet. |
Awww..chhoo chweeeet.....Very cute!!...Amazing work!!.....Great job! |
by Miu
Aww little humor in this sweet poem :) I think it was great how you played with the doubtness(if that is even a word)! Amazing write. Keep up the great work! :) 5/5 |