Excellent Acrostic!!..the flow was great..and the Choice of words was beautiful...and..lol...u r too good in writing acrostics..*sob*...i find it hard to write 1...kp it up!
Great work on this 1...another 5/5 as always!

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5/5

Descrptive, well written, great flow, strong emtion, yep you have an excellent poem here 5/5 perfect, please keep up the good work.

5/5 awesome poem well written Thanks for the comment on "Death's way"

#2. This was quite a nice Acrostic. I know for certain that you know well how I adore this type of poetry form. =] In any case, I think certain lines need tightening-up, in order to augment the overall rhythm of this work.

Nice one, nevertheless. =]

Best wishes,
Debbie

A gorgeous piece you have here, Really heart warming with a sweet dedication to someone you obviously care so much about. A great acrostic poem I found to be sweetly written. Well done 5/5~mel

Cuteeeeeeeeeee =] Lol, I don't know why, but this line just made me laughxD ; "Rock my world with your beautiful kindness" I think because it's like, cute and silly at the same time. (The Rock part.. ) arghh I having a hard time explaining what I mean today xD anyway, nicely done again =]
5/5
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Marc,
This is so sweet that you made a poem for a friend of yours ^_^ Not only did you do that though, you made it truly beautiful. The words and description were great!! ^_^
I have nothing to critisize, so keep it up!!! 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori

P.S. Thanks so much for the comment!!! ^_^