by Lesbian Natalie May 13, 2007
category :
Special events /
mothers day
Happy Mother's Day |
Excellent write from the heart and I really feel your pain ,,I still love you, I can't lie |
Lovely poem...touching deep beautiful way to wish for mother's day.it's so filled with emotion.....very deep way of expressing it!!..kp up the good work! |
by Sydney
Ohh so sad! Dont get me wrong..excellent..but ohh. Makes me sad..but its good to have a reader filled with emotion because it was an emotional poem. Well written. I like how every line rhymed with one another. Its the first poem I've seen like that and I thought it was good. Nice job! 5 out of 5. XD |