Really seeing?

by Stephanie Naylor   May 13, 2007


He glances around
and sees the face in the crowd,
that he once remembered so vividly.
Fierce feeling came rolling back.
All he wanted to do was just reach out and touch her velvet skin once more.

Seeing his love disappear into
the faces.
As she looked right threw him,
as though he never stood there.
His mind going mad.

His heart pounds
his palms start to sweat.
He twirls in circles
screaming out her name.
Thinking hopefully
she'll come back.

He falls to his knees.
locks his head between his hands.
Rocking his body Violently back in-forth.
Rain begins to fall,
a perfect ending to a perfect
feeling.
Knowing he did not see her face
for he had berried his wife long ago.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Christina Yap

    Wow, unexpected ending, deserved that 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    For he had berried his wife long ago
    berried should be buried. Other than that it flows fast, and the emtion is strong. excellent job on a well written poem 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This is a very powerful poem! great imagery! flow was good! I like the ending! I really enjoyed this one! good job! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Wow this was sooo freaky.. it reminded me of a grieving husband who lost his wife and is know seeing her in his dreams and stuff maybe like a ghost.. Wonderful job. I loved it.

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